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Seconds From Failure by ~NeoxFlame:iconNeoxFlame:



So I never knew we had this test…
Everyone else seems to be at their best.
Can such a nightmare get any worse?
Only I could be put under such curse.
Never had I been so helpless before
Don’t pretend that I can achieve a good score.
So black me out so I don’t have to live through

For the next hour is a hell all too true…
Real as it is, no one provides help
Only those who suffer are like myself
Make it go…just leave me be…

For when I study, then you’ll see.
All I did was forget to revise
It isn’t a reason for you to despise.
Look at me now; am I still whole?
Under this humiliation is still a soul.
Real, however, is the pain I’m yet to feel
Even a miracle won’t strike me a better deal.
©2006-2009 ~NeoxFlame
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Submitted: September 28, 2006
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Had a test today, and unfortunately, i had forgotten to revise *slaps self during spare time*. Therefore, achieved a damn low grade, but also created this poem that i crafted DURING the test, since i had nothing else to do...

Enjoy - and hopefully it's more than just a pile of dumb words (which in my case, i find that's quite accurate to say the least~)
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It's damn good considering the limitations of acronyms. Very good.

I like it.

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Death before dishonor.

Ex
I like it, and I know how you feel.
heh i think everyone has been there :nod:

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oh! to have died that night i realized it wouldn't last!
our days were numbered and the reaper tipped the hourglass

I want to love you but I better not touch
I want to hold you but my senses tell me
i love the way you did this whole acronym thing. sorry about your test :( bummer. but this is a really good poem. i think its even worth a favourite =P cheer up, you always get another chance ;)

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:bulletred: "Patience is a by-product of tribulations; it isn't granted, it is earned" :bulletred:
Very interesting, I must say. Hehe. And yea, I like the whole acronym thing. ^^ Seconds from failure... hehe. xP Nice. :^^

If only you could've gotten a good grade and wrote a nice poem too. xP

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You don't know me.
So don't act like you do.
Don't ask me either,
'Cause I too don't have a clue.

... Evelyn ...
Thanks dude :D Not a major test anyway, dun worri at all =)

Thanks for the :+fav: man!!

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=] Thanks a lott!! ^^

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Yeppo....failing to revise stings, lol @_____@

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Thanks dude =] Especially for u're familiarity with such a horrible feeling, lol~

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